The Standard #5 – Page 7
Here we see the young punks who Gilbert humiliated back in Chapter 4 make a comeback, similarly ill-fated as their last attempt to inflict violence on The Standard.
Can we guess who’ll be returning on tomorrow’s page?
Fun fact about this scene: when I submitted my first draft and got notes back from editor Steven Forbes, he corrected the word “olid,” believing I’d meant to type “old school” and had maybe hit a typo. I pointed out that no, this was no typo! Rather, “olid” is an obscure old word for stinky, and is another gloriously groanworthy pun in a line of them. This was probably the first – and possibly the last – time I knew something that Steve didn’t!
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