Ooft! That’s one dense page thick with dialogue! Kudos to Kel Nuttall for being able to navigate all that with his lettering and present it all on the page in as unobtrusive a manner as possible. But really, one of the issues I often tell myself I need to work on as a writer is learning to shut up and get my point across in less words.
Fortunately, the mass of dialogue is at least pretty decent, and seems to set up a suitable sense of foreboding about what the last chapter holds in store. Could there be a tragic ending ahead? You’ll have to keep on reading to find out!
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